The journey from there to here
A little lesson for joeusers
Published on January 26, 2005 By Gideon MacLeish In Blogging

This sentence, at the beginning of an article is essentially part of the thesis. If I am advancing an argument, I will begin here by stating my thesis and setting the tone for what is to follow. Throughout the remainder of the article, I will introduce you to the basic structure of an article that is meant to persuade or inform, and hope it will make your articles a little more coherent.

Following the thesis is the body of the article. Pretty much anything goes within the body, but the basic content should be to support the thesis. If you are all over the map in this part of the article, it is here where you are likely to lose your audience and/or invite "red herring" responses that meander all over the map, but, essentially, accomplish nothing (except for point whores who gain a few points through them; however, it is not even a good point whore tactic as, once you have established a reputation for such meandering, you will gradually lose your audience). This can be as many paragraphs as you'd like, but the basic theme should be one of supporting the thesis.

This is the conclusion. This is where a nicely written article gets all wrapped up and can often be accomplished by simply restating one's thesis in other words. Now, granted, the rules change for a rant, but again, it would get a little tiring if all we ever read of you gave us the conclusion that you had been a little too intimate with Mr. Daniels over the last couple of hours.

Best of luck and happy blogging.

Signing off (tongue firmly planted in cheek),

Gideon MacLeish


Comments
on Jan 26, 2005
Gideon, I'd love to have your permission to use this as an example for class!

*insightful* from the myrr-man
on Jan 26, 2005

feel free, myrr

on Jan 26, 2005
Posted: Wednesday, January 26, 2005 on gideon's trumpet
Message Board: Blogging
This sentence, at the beginning of an article is essentially part of the thesis. If I am advancing an argument, I will begin here by stating my thesis and setting the tone for what is to follow. Throughout the remainder of the article, I will introduce you to the basic structure of an article that is meant to persuade or inform, and hope it will make your articles a little more coherent.
Following the thesis is the body of the article. Pretty much anything goes within the body, but the basic content should be to support the thesis. If you are all over the map in this part of the article, it is here where you are likely to lose your audience and/or invite "red herring" responses that meander all over the map, but, essentially, accomplish nothing (except for point whores who gain a few points through them; however, it is not even a good point whore tactic as, once you have established a reputation for such meandering, you will gradually lose your audience). This can be as many paragraphs as you'd like, but the basic theme should be one of supporting the thesis.
This is the conclusion. This is where a nicely written article gets all wrapped up and can often be accomplished by simply restating one's thesis in other words. Now, granted, the rules change for a rant, but again, it would get a little tiring if all we ever read of you gave us the conclusion that you had been a little too intimate with Mr. Daniels over the last couple of hours.
Best of luck and happy blogging.
Signing off (tongue firmly planted in cheek),
Gideon MacLeish


If somehow I could only understand this< I am sure to become a better speller and gramarian too.

um could ya break this down some for me with examples so can "get it" btw if tongue in cheek still means your putting me on, I kinda get it now.
on Jan 26, 2005
lol

I'm going to add this post to a packet I give my kids called "Grammar for Nitwits." A great college professor I had wrote it, and it's wonderfully simple and very amusing. I've been adding things to it over the years, and this is perfect.
on Jan 26, 2005
This is a good reminder of how to write an article, and reminds me of my English class! But some people blog for the fun and creativity and don't really care about writing style. (Should I duck and cover?!)
on Jan 27, 2005

forever,

No, don't duck and cover. I put this article together after an extremely incoherent article someone posted that WAS trying to make a point. I love the creativity some people exercise, and I even love a good rant, but if the blog is meant to rally support to a cause, there should be SOME cohesiveness to it. There was none in the article in question (I'm giving the author the break of anonymity as they did apologize for some things that were said later).

on Jan 27, 2005
Thanks Gideon. I'm getting too old to run now anyway!

there should be SOME cohesiveness to it.

This is true.

It was a very informative article though. Thank you.